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http://www.admissiontest.org 2003-1-18 19:23:45 寄托天下作者:painesmith

回来后睡了一觉，现在回忆了一下当时写的作文，印象不是很深了，和原文会有出入。麻烦大家打个分

Whether a person's childhood is the most important years in his life has been controversial for a long time in China.As far as i am concerned, i insist that the childhood is vital in a person's life.

There are many reasons to support my opinion,with the first one dealing
with the character of people.There is an old saying that one's character
determines his life.If we think further,it is easier to find that one's
character is largely subject to influence of his environment in his early
years.A recent research has shown that a person who is sanguine may be the
result of living with easy-going parents while those who turn out to be
phlegmatic and choleric may suffer unpleasant family when they were
children.

The second reason has something to do with one's habits and impression of
the world,which come into formation in this period. According to Freud,the
famous psycologist,the impressions of things people obtain mostly depend on
their early experience and change little in their later life.For instance,
people who are brought up by the sea may regard an octopus as a luxury
while those who were born and grew up in hinterland may refer to it as a
fearful creature.This view is also backed up by a scientist who won the
Nobel Prize, saying that all his good habits were learnt when he was in the
kindergarten.

Admittedly,some people can have a quite large change in the later life; However, they only constitute a small proportion of the population.

To put all in a nutshell, i agree that a person's childhood is the most
important years in his life.

自我感觉写得还不算差，4分该有，就是重复的语句有点多，写得不够长，结尾来不及，有点仓促。

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