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http://www.gter.net 2003-8-4 10:22:30 作者:新浪教育


【题目】

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.


【范文】

Changing My Hometown

My hometown is a large city with a dense population. Because it is crowded with people and their vehicles, the environment is not as clean as I would like it to be. Too many cars and buses pollute the air and people also create a lot of garbage that is not always disposed of properly. If I could change just one thing about my hometown, it would be the environment. I would make it a cleaner and less polluted place to live.

I believe that such a change is important because a person's living environment can greatly affect both his physical and mental health. Bad air quality can contribute to many health problems such as asthma, and improperly discarded garbage can spread bacteria that are dangerous to health. In addition, the environment can greatly affect the way a person feels. When in clean, attractive surroundings we always feel more optimistic. For these reasons, I think the people of my hometown should work together to make it a cleaner place to live.

Insgroupsto accomplish this goal we have to not only enact laws to limit pollution, but also take personal responsibility for our own actions. Only when people realize the effect that the environment has on their well-being will they take such proposals seriously. Therefore, we must first inform people of the dangers of a poor environment. Then I believe we can all live happier, healthier lives.

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改变我的家乡

我的家乡是个人口密集的大城市。因为挤满了人和车辆,所以它的环境没有我所希望的那么干净。过多的汽车及公共汽车污染了空气,人们制造的许多垃圾也不一定能够得到妥善处理。如果我只能改变家乡的一样东西,那么我想改变的就是它的环境。我想使它成为一个更干净、污染更少的居住场所。

我认为这样的改变是很重要的,因为居住环境可能会大大地影响人们的身体及心理健康。不良的空气质量可能会导致许多健康方面的问题,例如哮喘;而随意丢弃的垃圾也会传播有害健康的细菌。此外,环境对于人们的感受会有相当大的影响。在干净而宜人的环境里,我们
一定会觉得更乐观。因此,我认为家乡的居民应该共同合作,让它成为更干净的居住场所。为了达到这项目标,我们不仅要制定法律来限制污染,还必须为自己的行为负责。只有了解环境对健康的影响,人们才会认真考虑这些提议。因此,我们必须先让大家知道不良环境可
能造成的危险。我相信这样一来,我们都能过着更快乐、更健康的生活。

【注释】hometown n.出生的故乡;生长的城市

dense adj.密集的

be crowded with挤满了

vehicle n.车辆

not always不一定(=not necessarily )

dispose of处理

properly adv.适当地

contribute v.促成〈to〉

asthma n.哮喘

discard v.抛弃

spread v.传播

bacteria n. (pl.)细菌

optimistic adj.乐观的

accomplish v.完成

enact v.制定(法律)

well-being n.健康

take. . .seriously把…看得很认真

proposal n.提议


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【题目】

It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?


【范文】

Book Knowledge vs Experience

Knowledge can be acquired from many sources. These include books, teachers and practical experience, and each has its own advantages. The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life. We can study all the places in the world and learn from people we will never meet in our lifetime, just by reading about them in books. We can also develop our analytical skills and learn how to view and interpret the world around us in different ways. Furthermore, we can learn from the past by reading books. In this way, we won't repeat the mistakes of others and can build on

their achievements.

Practical experience, on the other hand, can give us more useful knowledge. It is said that one learns best by doing, and I believe that this is true,whether one is successful or not. In fact, I think making mistakes is the best way to learn. Moreover, if one wants to make new advances, it is necessary to act. Innovations do not come about through reading but through experimentation. Finally, one can apply the skills and insights gained through the study of books to practical experience, making an already meaningful experience more meaningful. However, unless it is applied to real experiences, book knowledge remains theoretical and, in the end, is useless. That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books.


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书本知识与实际经验

获得知识的来源有很多,其中包括书本、老师,以及实际经验,而每一种都有其优点。从书本上及正规教育中所获得的知识使我们知道在日常生活中没有机会亲身去体验的事。通过读书,我们可以研究世界各地的资料,还可以向不曾谋面的人学习。我们也可以培养分析的技
巧,并学习如何以不同的方式去观察并理解周围的世界。此外,我们可以通过读书,从历史中获取教训。如此一来,就不会再重复别人的错误,并且能够以他人的成就作为我们行动的基础。

另一方面,实际经验能够给我们更多有用的知识。大家都说从做中学的效果最好,我也认为的确如此,无论一个人成功与否。事实上,我认为犯错是最好的学习方式。此外,如果想要有新的进展,就必须要付诸行动。想要创新,只靠阅读是不够的,必须要去实践。最后,我 们可以将通过读书所获得的技巧和见解应用于实际经验中,使得原本有意义的经验变得更有意义。不过,除非我们能将书本知识运用于实际经验中,否则书本知识终究仍只是理论,毫无用处。那就是为什么我会认为从实际经验中获得的知识比从书本中所得到的知识更为重要。

【注释】acquire v.获得

source n.来源

practical adj.实际的

gain v.获得

formal adj.正规的

study v.研究

lifetime n.一生

analytical adj.分析的

view v.考虑;观察

interpret v.解释

repeat v.重复

build on以…为行动的基础

achievements n.(pl.)成就

on the other hand另一方面

it is said that据说(=people say that )

advance n.进步

innovation n.创新

come about产生

experimentation n.实验

apply v.应用〈to〉

insight n.洞察力;见识

meaningful adj.有意义的

theoretical adj.理论的

in the end到最后;终究



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【指导说明】WRITING

Read the essay question carefully.

Think before you write. Making notes may help you to organize the essay.

It is important to write only on the topic you are given.

Check your work. Allow a few minutes before the time is up to go over your
essay and make changes.

In the actual test, you must stop writing at the end of 30 minutes. If you
continue to write, it will be considered cheating.

If you finish your essay in less than 30 minutes.

【题目】

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.




【范文】

Why People Attend College or University?

There are many advantages to a college or university education. Students have ample opportunity to explore a variety of interests, increase both their general and specific knowledge, prepare for a chosen career and develop independence. All of these are valuable goals to achieve, but it is my belief that most students today pursue higher education insgroupsto
prepare for their future careers.

In the past, only the rich and privileged had the opportunity to attend a university and their goals were very different. Coming from wealthy families, few of them would have to compete for a job after graduation, and most wished only to be considered well-educated. Today's students are more practical. They must be able to compete in a very competitive job market; therefore, a practical education is very important. Furthermore, higher education is a big investment and so most students want to get all they can out of it. For these students, it is better to have clearly defined career and education goals rather than to try and find themselves in college. Of course, all students want to increase their knowledge, but I believe that most students today want that knowledge to be relevant to their future careers.

The world has changed a great deal since universities were established.They are still wonderful places for acquiring broad knowledge and for personal development. However, in today's competitive world these pursuits must be balanced with the pursuit of more specific goals. That is why I think most students view higher education as a valuable tool in career
preparation.

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人们为什么要上大学

【译文】

大学教育有很多优点。大学生能有充分的机会去探索自己感兴趣的各种事物、增长一般与特定的知识、为自己所选定的职业生涯做准备,并培养独立的个性。这些全都是值得追求的宝贵目标。但是我认为,现今大多数的学生接受高等教育是为了要对未来的职业生涯做准备。
在过去,只有富人及特权阶级才有机会上大学,而且他们的目标相差悬殊。因为他们出身于富有的家庭,所以毕业后很少有人必须要和别人竞争,以取得工作机会,大多数只是希望让别人觉得他们受过良好的教育。现在的学生实际得多。由于必须在竞争激烈的就业市场和别
人竞争,因此,讲求实用价值的教育就变得很重要。此外,高等教育是一项重大的投资,所以大多数的学生都会竭尽所能,想从中得到一切。对这些学生而言,最好是有明确的职业和教育目标,而不是在大学中才试着自己去寻找。当然,所有的学生都想要增长知识,但是我
认为,现在大多数的学生都希望获得跟未来职业相关的知识。

自从大学设立以来,世界已有了重大的改变。大学仍然是一个获得广泛知识和寻求个人发展的极佳的场所。然而,在这个竞争激烈的世界里,在追求这些目标的同时,还必须有更明确的目标来加以平衡。那就是为什么我会认为大多数的学生都视高等教育为职业准备的一项宝
贵的工具。

【注释】ample adj.充足的

explore v.探索

a variety of各式各样的

specific adj.特定的

chosen adj.选出来的

pursue v.追求

higher education高等教育

privileged adj.有特权的

practical adj.实际的

competitive adj.竞争激烈的

furthermore adv.此外

investment n.投资

define v.界定;下定义

relevant adj.有关联的

acquire v.获得

broad adj.广泛的

pursuit n.追求

view A as B视A为B(=see A as B)

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【题目】

  How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.


  【范文】

  The Influence of Television and Movies

  There is no doubt that watching television and movies can influence the way that people behave. Moreover, it seems that people are spending more and more time watching some sort of visual entertainment, whether it is television, a video tape or a DVD. Therefore, the effects of visual media cannot be ignored.

  One obvious effect of these media is that watching them induces people to buy certain products. Television advertising is widespread and,nowadays, even movie theaters permit advertisements. Another way TV and the movies affect people is that they give people either a broader view of the world or a distorted one, depending on what type of program they watch.Those who watch news and educational program can learn many new things while those who watch primarily entertainment shows may come to believe that most people in the world possess great wealth and good looks. It may make them become dissatisfied with their own lives. Finally, perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children, who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see on TV or in the movies.

  With the ever-increasing popularity of video entertainment, society must pay attention to these effects. Television and movies, while entertaining and informative, cannot take the place of real experience.

电视和电影的影响
  【译文】

  电视和电影的影响

  电视和电影无疑会影响人们的行为举止。此外,人们似乎在花越来越多的时间去观看一些视觉娱乐节目,无论是电视、录像带,或是DVD。因此,视觉媒体的影响是不容忽视的。

  这些媒体所造成的最明显的影响是,人们在观看之后会被诱使去购买某些产品。现在电视广告非常普遍,即使是电影院,也允许播放广告。另外一个电视及电影会影响人们的方式是,它们能使人们对世界有更广阔的见解或是扭曲的看法,而这取决于人们所观看的是什么样的节目。凡是观看新闻性及教育性节目的人可以学习许多新事物,而主要观看娱乐节目的观众可能就会认为,世界上大多数的人都很有钱,而且长得都很好看,这可能会使他们对自己的生活感到不满意。最后,儿童可能是最容易受影响的观众。他们可能无法分辨真实与虚构,而且可能会试着模仿在电视或电影中所看到的行为。

  由于视觉娱乐越来越普遍,所以社会大众必须注意其可能造成的影响。尽管电视及电影兼具娱乐性和知识性,但还是无法取代实际的经验。


  【注释】

  behave v.行为举止

  visual adj.视觉的

  DVD数码影音光碟(=digital visual disk )

  media n. (pl.)媒体

  induce v.劝诱,诱导

  advertising n.广告

  widespread adj.普遍的

  view n.看法

  distorted adj.扭曲的

  depend on视…而定

  program n.节目

  primarily adv.主要地

  possess v.拥有

  wealth n.财富

  susceptible adj.易受影响的

  viewer n.观众

  tell A from B分辨A与B

  fiction n.虚构的事

  imitate v.模仿

  ever-increasing adj.不断增加的

  video adj.电视影像的

  informative adj.能增进知识的

  take the place of取代

 

 


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